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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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A white twirls at rhythmic beat life is revealed on earth's seat figurative tombstone sways on head had removed the black cloak of the dead Head whirls independent of feet Dervish dance, a spiritual feat Dervish whirl and twirl away from the ego swirl rejoice, it's a dance with your maker the prejudiced have you dubbed a faker Feet twirl unconcious of head Dervish dance for spiritual sted. To a heavenly maker, united in a chant the ego dissolves with a musical recant prejudiced are those intolerant practices push what formalized religion expresses man thinks he evolves as technology advances in actuality he regresses. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
man thinks he evolves as technology advances in actuality he regresses. yes in many ways, sadly o well let's dance  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
yes that would be better than thinking of the latest cell phone system!...good Sunday to you  |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Oh Martin, You have such a way with words. I like this. :-) Within this heart you'll find love |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
we depend so much on technology I saw the sadness of that in hurricane Ivan...no food or water, no gas for cars, no power for cooking or running computers, no getting money from the ATM, cell phone services down, etc. It was a disaster. But people find out, in something like that, what's really important, when they lose their material possessions and have to live without the things they've grown comfortable with, the things that make life easy... family and friends and simply surviving |
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