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Listening Closely..........I Hear
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Listening Closely..........I Hear |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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The sun was brightly shining when I arose on this cool, clear day I love these days of winter here.... so peacefully shining, the sun, in such a loving way It seems to wear a big smile as if to say come out and enjoy me do you want to play I wonder if you are enjoying the beautiful sun where you are this morn I know you are somewhere out there beneath the big skies wishing to me your love could show Wait, I hear the birds singing way up high in the sky Are they bringing a message from you to me Listening closely I seem to hear so clearly the words, "I love you" Look, I think I see dark clouds coming into view I wonder if it will rain I know as you look into the skies in your heart you feel the same pain as I Only a few more days, my love then together you and I will be again Enjoying each other with the sun smiling at us or rain softly falling Regardless of what nature in all its wisdom may to us show Being together will be such joy no matter what else happens of this we surely know |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl A delight to read and may your wish come true. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Ethel..I do hope you and Gary will be together for the holidays. ~Hugs & love to you sweet lady~ ~ Let peace begin with me... ~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel Mae, there is something extra-special about this poem. It may possibly be my favourite poem of yours that I have had the pleasure of reading. I truly, truly, LOVED it! I felt every beautiful word! Your heart is pure and loving. You deserve the best! ~ for lucky Gary certainly has it! ~ YOU!  Love you! Linda Lou |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
May all of your heartfelt dreams and wishes come true this magical season Ethel. hugs, Chrislane "At one glance |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Beautiful write Ethel. I hope your dream comes true too.  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wonderful, beautiful write. Eric |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Until your last two verses, I was with you every step of the way... nodding my head in complete agreement... knowing... knowing. *S* I can only envy you the anticipation, though. *S* And... I can be glad for you. *S* Beautiful write!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is so good to see your heart soaring...  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
True love shines through every word, dear Ethel. Beautiful. Love, Margherita  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks everybody!! I'm having problems getting back in because I got a new hard-drive on my computer. I will see ya'll when I can. Hugs, Ethel |
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