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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-12-05 07:17 AM


While Walking

While walking through the rain one day
I saw the mist of rainbow play
Its entrance either left or right
But nowhere could I find its sight

I searched and searched to find the door
It seemed to go forevermore
It played upon horizons dust
But never stayed my touch or thrust

The wonder of it played my mind
A goal that I could never find
Until I sent my phantom knight
To enter through the spirits light

And there upon the rainbows glow
I found the treasure of its sow
The terra form of self impose
That had the essence of a rose

Beyond life’s thorns upon its stem
Lied the crown of diadem



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1 posted 2004-12-05 07:27 AM


Beautiful thoughts this morn, Seymour.
Thanks for sharing yours.
Hugs,  
Ethel

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-12-05 07:36 AM


Ethel,
You are up early this morning, good morning sweet.

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3 posted 2004-12-05 08:55 AM



Thank you for this early morning walk, Sy...
it left a lovely raindrop in my eye...




Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2004-12-05 08:59 AM


Sunshine
A rain drop of brine?

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5 posted 2004-12-05 08:59 AM


"And there upon the rainbows glow
I found the treasure of its sow
The terra form of self impose
That had the essence of a rose

Beyond life’s thorns upon its stem
Lied the crown of diadem"


Sy, Thank you for this beautiful morning read!
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2004-12-05 09:01 AM


Nancy,
Sunday tea with thee is my delight.

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7 posted 2004-12-05 09:51 AM


The most beautiful rose, is a Sir Sigh Rose... Flowers

Love & Rainbow Light,
Linda
Rainbow

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2004-12-05 10:02 AM


Linda
Thank you sweet and have a wonderful day yourself.

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9 posted 2004-12-05 10:27 AM


This is truly a beautiful write Seymour and I am gently placing it into my library.
Blessings to you, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2004-12-05 12:35 PM


Chris,
Thank you sweet and have a happy holiday.


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11 posted 2004-12-05 07:13 PM


smiling wide here...

you are so irresistibly sweet.

(and I can't count how many times I've fallen for all my sky-gazing while walking)

But sy? you are always worth the trip.


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12 posted 2004-12-05 07:25 PM


Sy

The rainbow that you saw on walk
has to do with the person that you are


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13 posted 2004-12-05 08:03 PM


always a pleasure


Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2004-12-05 08:23 PM


serenity,
My happiness is your smile.

Martie,
You are a love.

MGROVES,
My pleasure, thank you.

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15 posted 2004-12-05 08:37 PM


This is the treasure at the end of the rainbow Sy.

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2004-12-05 08:46 PM


scorpio
Thank you my friend.

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17 posted 2004-12-08 09:12 AM


Beautiful rhyme. I'm a walker so of course I had to read. Enjoyed.
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