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ecrivan
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0 posted 2004-12-05 01:36 AM




Send more people in the region
build it up to be a legion
good to save face and occupy
coerce, justify, spy
as much as one relates
a road for peace in haste
from carcasses comes paste
embroiled.

Embroiled one becomes
count the setting suns
call for more and more
swell at hearts content
who cares of days called lent
blind power empties fields
if its power you wield
you'll face resistant shields
mass graves after human tides
saturated with black gold

The story of conflict is old
you, insignificant and young
traitors hung
it's all been done before
but send more people to the region
pride yourself of the latest legion...



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Snowflake From Hell
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1 posted 2004-12-05 01:41 AM


well written

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ecrivan
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2 posted 2004-12-05 01:49 AM


Thanks for your comment...the decision to send more troops when they should have been pulled a long time ago..spurred me on to do this.


passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-12-05 05:26 AM


yes Martin, I agree
froggy
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4 posted 2004-12-06 03:29 PM


I totally agree Martin. The troops should be pulled not more deployed over.

I like this one.

:-)

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EagleScorpion
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5 posted 2004-12-06 05:12 PM


yeah.. i almost want to say those people can not be helped.. but if were helping them.. why dont we help EVERY country with an evil dictatorship answer that question for me
ecrivan
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6 posted 2004-12-06 07:45 PM


that's because the appalling truth behind the help it occurs as long it meets the interests of the powers that be...
there was and is no oil in Rwanda worth fighting for that's why tribal cleansing went on unabated,the same for other halocausts where top leaders turned a blind eye.



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