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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-12-04 08:18 PM

When they talked of Brussels
It fell on deaf ears
Just come home
Every fortnight
Was the cry so dear

When the talked of Hamburg
The English town
Just come home
Once a month
Was the cry renown

When the talked of the South of France
Where I could retire
Apartment in Mouchen
Alps to my left side
Come back now was the cry so dear

Filling out the forms
For unemployment money
For housing benefit
And what words
Can I say to those
Who backed me and supported me

I like to sit unemployed
On the state
Tied to the state
Governed by the state

And people who were prepared to back me

Enjoy life

Whilst I wait

For a handout
Until I sell
And wont end the mistake

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

1 posted 2004-12-04 08:20 PM

feeling this very deep inside. thanks for your reply, but i left out a couple of paragraphs, so you might want to read again. i have missed your intriging words of wisdom

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-12-05 07:06 AM

Dave, good one

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2004-12-05 03:22 PM

Dave you are a unique and wonderful voice.

Eric

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2004-12-05 04:35 PM

Great write Dave!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!
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since 2003-01-23

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5 posted 2004-12-05 06:04 PM

You have such a striking, unusual point of view....I like that in a poem, and in a poet.

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2004-12-06 06:58 AM

a poem of great feelings and thought...thank you for sharing.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2004-12-06 07:10 PM

Centered in yourself, in harmony with your higher self, I would say, you bring forth clarity of thought, expressed with true power.

Love, Margherita

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2004-12-06 07:22 PM

Excellent write Dave!!!
Enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

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