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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-12-04 08:17 PM

There Is

if I pulled you to me
how close would you fit
there is
such a lonesome place
under my skin

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

1 posted 2004-12-04 09:08 PM

A short stab but a painful one. A loneliness so void it would be a vacuum. Well done

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

2 posted 2004-12-04 09:55 PM

All night I could not sleep
Because of the moonlight on my bed.
I kept on hearing a voice calling:
Out of Nowhere, Nothing answered “yes”.

Tzu Yeh

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2004-12-04 11:11 PM

Sad, yet beautiful write.

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2004-12-05 12:05 PM

I know the feeling. Beautiful write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

5 posted 2004-12-05 01:04 AM

The need is nothing
when compared to understanding
lust with all its pretty colors
bending into rainbows
through the prisms
in the windows of the soul;
the quiet heart draws love
without demanding
the challenge
is remembering the goal.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-12-05 05:21 AM

I wonder the same thing sometimes

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2004-12-05 03:23 PM

Wow Helen...!!!!

Eric

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2004-12-05 05:41 PM

OneSlick~
One little word-hug from you says sooooooo much~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

9 posted 2004-12-05 06:21 PM

and I have spent a lifetime trying to fill that spot with trivialities...

You write of it so simply and beautifully.

This one made me lonely for conversations.

miss you

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

10 posted 2004-12-05 06:25 PM

So much said in so few words - it's a gift I envy. Well done!

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

11 posted 2004-12-08 10:07 AM

There is ....

      ... an emptiness waiting for its fill
          a heart missing its beat
          a skin lost in its warmth

          and a soul wanting to be whole

   there is much to be said in these few words.

                    Deeply touched

                                       *S

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