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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-12-04 07:56 PM


We dropped bread crumbs of ideas
Glistening

We dropped ideas of bread
Feeding

We skated as we walked
Across a fur wrapped porch

Wrapped with the bread crumbs of ideas and a feeling of hunger



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1 posted 2004-12-05 07:43 PM


it is amazing
how people can feed others
with thought, and love,
and hope...

and themselves
remain wanting...

it may be the poet inside...
always searching.

Very good, Dave.

Thank you.

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2 posted 2004-12-05 08:01 PM


always enjoy your words


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3 posted 2004-12-05 08:28 PM


interesting write...and I mean that in a good way!

~Alli~

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4 posted 2004-12-07 04:35 PM


Another great write Dave.

Eric

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5 posted 2004-12-07 04:42 PM


Awesome Dave!  hugs, Chris
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6 posted 2004-12-07 06:38 PM


Thanks all

Dave

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