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MGROVES
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0 posted 2004-12-04 06:42 PM



parts of me
want to curl up and hide
the lies,from one's i love
are tearing out my inside
the love
i feel
their anger
will only kill
i try
to understand
destroy
the will, their command
love and forgiveness
i place in my heart
they won't accept
turn to hate
yet won't let you depart
i feel
only love
soft, tender
as heavens, above
yet my heart
cries out
my spirt
shouts
it needs
to fly free
see their
faces
hidden among a tree
i can hear
soul's sing
as whispers
encouraging my spirit
to spread it's wings
take flight
been grounded
too long
set soul
free
so other's
can go
and do unto thee
numbers
are racing
through my mind
visions
that undue
the dead
a place
back in time
ruins left
they abanded
THE DEVINE
the colors
6 circles of light
passing over
their souls
controlled by
the unknown
even when in sight
curl up
find a hole
and die
or open
eyes
abandon their
lies
get back souls control
love, light
wings,flight
numbers, 6
trees,
faces
in the pic's
can't let
darkness control
or i'll end up
in that dark hole
cut the chains
gather
their remains
look to
the sky
it's time
to fly




[This message has been edited by MGROVES (12-04-2004 07:58 PM).]

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Kethry
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1 posted 2004-12-04 07:47 PM


It is indeed time to fly and I could feel you straining at the tethers holding you. Good job with this, but you might want to go back and edit the few typing errors.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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2 posted 2004-12-04 07:59 PM


Printed this out

Nuff said - worth keeping

Dave

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3 posted 2004-12-04 08:15 PM


thanks, but sorry i left out a couple of paragraphs. would not of know it first reply didnt say check on my spelling

thanks dave. you dont know how much this means to me


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4 posted 2004-12-04 09:21 PM


you have strong wings, and will fly free whenever you let your heart and mind do so

heart hugs

and this is a very good write, m'friend

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5 posted 2004-12-04 10:47 PM


Nice writing....James
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6 posted 2004-12-04 11:06 PM


Amazing write Marsha!

~Alli~

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7 posted 2004-12-04 11:22 PM


marcia, I tried to reply to this in email and tried to send you email before, but it keeps saying your mailbox is full and won't let messages go through...it keeps sending the emails back

I have been thinking of you, but haven't been able to contact you.


MGROVES
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8 posted 2004-12-04 11:29 PM


thankyou for replies, they mean alot. yea dixie, i moved, use adragonsdream@hotmail.com
luv ya. and thankyou


Snowflake From Hell
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9 posted 2004-12-05 12:57 PM


awesome well done

can you fly like a penguin

latearrival
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10 posted 2004-12-05 12:19 PM


MGROVES: We alone hold the key, remember butterflys fly free. marty
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11 posted 2004-12-05 03:20 PM


What a powerful, meaningful write.
Great poem!

Eric

MGROVES
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12 posted 2005-01-11 05:51 AM


thankyou all for your replies


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13 posted 2005-01-11 03:53 PM


What a portrayal of the classic struggle's in life nicely done little lady.
Magnus
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14 posted 2005-01-11 05:26 PM


The push and pull of feelings and emotions,
like the tides that slowly ebb or fill.
Life is so kin to that.  Nicely done.

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