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December

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Huan Yi
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Waukegan


0 posted 12-04-2004 01:23 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


The snow
falls
so
slowly

as if
lonely

for someone
far away

© Copyright 2004 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
~DreamChild~
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in your dreams


1 posted 12-04-2004 01:25 PM       View Profile for ~DreamChild~   Email ~DreamChild~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~DreamChild~

i like how you related loneliness to snowfall. perhaps the snow has yet a strong will, to keep moving, even so slowly.
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


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Yes it does...like the thought here~
passing shadows
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displaced


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The World of Poetry


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Short yet sad write. wow...

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Drauntz
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beautiful.
 
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