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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-12-04 08:08 AM


on the wall again
after near a year
and my fingers still
have a memory

what if you fall
she says
ms bubbly
on her rolling stairs

but I can fly
I say
I have you know
since I was three

then show me
she says
let me see you
please let go

I shall I say
but dance first
for me here
without your clothes

I can't she said
everyone would know
exactly I replied
as my hidden wings

refound their fold
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DarK

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-12-04 08:10 AM


Dark,
LOL enjoyed.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2004-12-04 08:35 AM


I can't she said
everyone would know
exactly I replied
as my hidden wings

refound their fold

~*~

Wow...the first three poems I click on this morning, and melancholy runs ragged...

strong, this...
mirroring many, I imagine...

and heck of a wake up call to those who
read..., knowing.

vandana
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3 posted 2004-12-04 09:29 AM


nice read
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2004-12-04 10:40 AM


on the wall again
after near a year
and my fingers still
have a memory


~silent thoughts~
M

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-12-04 12:58 PM



*Alli4000*
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6 posted 2004-12-04 02:35 PM


Wow.

~Alli~


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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180
New York City
7 posted 2004-12-04 06:27 PM


the imagery in this is delicately...unforgettable...

niiicely done, Dark...

**babybgirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2004-12-04 06:38 PM


A soft 'yes'...
Martie
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9 posted 2004-12-04 10:07 PM


Sweet!  
MGROVES
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california
10 posted 2006-08-22 01:02 AM


yes,too sweet-

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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