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MGROVES
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0 posted 2004-12-04 06:52 AM



my spirit has been
unable to spread it's wings
to free my soul
one must cut the puppeters strings
my soul
cant allow wrong
the puppeteers strings
controlling and strong
my heart
sheds tears
as it feels
all saddness and fears
to see
happiness,love, know only right
i must break away
strong needs, a journey's flight
beyond the sea
i hear them call
the puppeteers strings
won't allow,wants me to fall
or is that fail
never seeing
behind their veil
tonight the strings
i cut one and all
tomorrow i stand
free and tall


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-12-04 08:30 AM



Those who hold the strings
do not care if you fall...

and it would certainly irk them
if you succeeded...

Go for failure...at least you will know
you tried...

and you might very well bump into success.

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2004-12-04 11:59 AM


...snip, snip!

Keep the faith ~ and fly!

Wonderful write!


EA


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3 posted 2004-12-04 12:16 PM


oh sweetheart! How Inspiring!

I truly have missed you too...it's about time you got back here!


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4 posted 2004-12-04 12:24 PM


MGROVES
You are only cutting the strings of the mind. Enjoyed

MGROVES
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5 posted 2004-12-04 01:38 PM


thankyou all for your replies. i have missed all of you


Snowflake From Hell
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6 posted 2004-12-05 01:02 AM


inspiring indeed

can you fly like a penguin

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7 posted 2004-12-05 06:28 PM


Very nice...James
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