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The Canvas (re-written)
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The Canvas (re-written) |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Watercolor pictures faded memories cluttering my mind spilling through my eyes. Hues of red and blue stained canvas masking my youth smeared with age. Diluted resistance lucid lines present stroking my years reluctant and used. Faced with reality adust canvas aging image time soon forgets. Naome James Rev. 12-03-04 Original: The Canvas Water color pictures and faded memories Are cluttering up my mind And spilling through my eyes. Shades of red and blue Stain my canvas face; Hiding signs of youth And smearing it with age. Diluted by resistance And mental disarray, Memories of my past Reluctantly fade to gray. Faced now with reality, and a vision of what's to come. A new image covers me-- I think I'll despise this one. Naome James Copyright © April 2001 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I like them both... well done |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Beautiful imagery, Naome. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Beautiful write. Enjoyed~  ~Alli~ |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
enjoyed |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Thanks all for responding. Take care! quatro |
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