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Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-12-03 11:39 AM


I sit here in my room...
This is where I dream,
Where I lay and silently scream.
I sit here in my room...
Thinking of you,
Hoping it is true.
I sit here in my room...
Wondering if it's meant to be,
Hoping you'll make me see.
I sit here in my room...
I'm breaking down,
Smile turns to a frown.
I sit here in my room...
Hurt and lost,
Feeling I've lost at all cost.
I sit here in my room...
Dazed and confused,
Feeling misused.
I sit here in my room...
Alone crying,
Heart left dying.
I sit here in my room...
Wondering what to believe.

can you fly like a penguin

© Copyright 2004 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2004-12-03 11:52 AM


oh I'm sorry
Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2004-12-03 11:53 AM


so very poignant and filled with emotion.  Very well done and heres a and hug to you.
Paula Finn
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missouri
3 posted 2004-12-03 12:09 PM


hugs my son
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-12-03 12:09 PM


Sending heart hugs your way Kyle~
Copperbell
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5 posted 2004-12-03 09:23 PM


my hugs also

Life is so tough sometimes - looking back I can see it made me a stronger person, a better person than had difficult things never happened. - something that always cheers me up: Psalm 144:17-18

Take care...chin up

MGROVES
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california
6 posted 2004-12-04 04:45 AM


hugs to you too!!
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