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VAS
Member Rara Avis
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0 posted 2004-12-03 10:42 AM



Elan

awake
corpuscles dancing
synapses prancing
morning has reached
in and grabbed
me with verve

I gotta get off

this chair!


well, when my coffee’s finished

©December 3, 2004

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2004 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-12-03 11:56 AM


yeah, only when the coffee's done
quatro
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2 posted 2004-12-03 03:04 PM


Or when the microwave rings that my frozen dinner is ready.

Enjoyed!

quatro

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3 posted 2004-12-03 03:07 PM


Whenever I see Elan's name, I think of the meaning of his name! lol Mind you, I like your poetic ~ and vivid! ~ rendition of it!

May your December be full of elan ~ and may your corpuscles cooperate! lol

Merry hugs!
EA

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4 posted 2004-12-04 10:57 PM


LOL! I know the feeling!

~Alli~

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5 posted 2004-12-04 11:45 PM


lmao   need that


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