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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2004-12-02 07:57 PM




Gift of the clouds
making love to the sky
rendevous at midnight
dreamlover and i,

celestial rapture
a sprinkling of white
descent off this dark ledge
leap of faith, to your light

a stargazer's paradise
the moons' crescent shape
eternity's timelessness
this haven of escape

if only to capture
our moment of bliss
the crystalized fantasy
of the snow's melting kiss

the call to commitment
shatters pipedreams above
the torment of this secrecy
the transience of our love



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choshi
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1 posted 2004-12-02 09:32 PM


Beautiful.......just beautiful, you capture so much here   ~P
passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-12-03 07:37 AM


love that last verse
I can relate too well

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3 posted 2004-12-03 06:12 PM


Lovely write...beautiful.

~Alli~

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