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choshi
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0 posted 2004-12-02 05:57 PM






As dawn breaks
a lone maple remains
clinging-
amidst a dewdrop world
how soon our seasons vanish.

© Copyright 2004 Paul C. Cooper - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-12-02 05:59 PM


this is just beautiful
choshi
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2 posted 2004-12-02 06:56 PM


Hi SEA,

Thank you   ~P

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2004-12-02 07:47 PM


the leaf is wet with dew
gifted by the clouds
making love to the sky

choshi
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4 posted 2004-12-02 07:51 PM


To: Inkedgoddess:
Beautiful perceptive expression of the eros in nature.....I'm glad you picked up on that theme....~P

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5 posted 2004-12-02 07:54 PM


a lovely splash of color here, choshi




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6 posted 2004-12-02 08:11 PM


sorry Paul, wrong username *blush* (its me Dawn)
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7 posted 2004-12-02 08:13 PM


vanish

but maybe not in memories  

*hug*

(next time i should remember to check the details before submitting!)

choshi
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8 posted 2004-12-02 09:12 PM


sorry Paul, wrong username *blush* (its me Dawn)


Hi Dawn,  By any name, you are beautiful.....~P

choshi
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9 posted 2004-12-02 09:13 PM


but maybe not in memories  

*hug*


Vanish in time, yet the memories remain.....

hugs you back   ~P

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10 posted 2004-12-03 12:43 PM


just gorgeous
choshi
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11 posted 2004-12-03 02:34 PM


Thank you ~Dixie....
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12 posted 2004-12-03 03:03 PM


Poem and photo blend for a presentation that's just lovely. *S*
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13 posted 2004-12-03 03:08 PM


A poetic Kodak moment...


EA

choshi
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14 posted 2004-12-03 03:44 PM


A poetic Kodak moment


Thank you EA....    back at ya'

choshi
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15 posted 2004-12-03 03:45 PM


Thank you Suthern....
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You inspire me, you really do. You find such beauty in simple things.....

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17 posted 2005-01-23 10:59 AM


Such an intense moment of time passing you captured so beautifully.

Had not seen this, so I am grateful to Ratleader for bringing it back.

Love, Margherita

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18 posted 2005-01-23 03:44 PM


BEAUTIFUL WRITE!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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19 posted 2005-01-24 03:14 PM


So true... so beautiful!!! *S*
choshi
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20 posted 2005-01-24 04:17 PM


Thank you Suthern, Alli, Margherita, Ratleader.....~P
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