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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2004-12-02 02:08 PM


        

As the others blend  
within the seascape,

one rises above
moving the still of sky,

she glides,

along the wings
of her echo,

triumphant

and for the moment

free

Photo by: Choshi





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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2004-12-02 02:20 PM


oh....oh.....so very beautiful Michelle!!  Perfect.
Susan
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walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-12-02 02:30 PM


Just lovely - sigh -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Enchantress
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3 posted 2004-12-02 02:38 PM


Beautiful  Michele....and the perfect picture to go with it!!
Hugs~Nancy

~ Let peace begin with me... ~

stevebrklynnyc
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4 posted 2004-12-02 06:13 PM


If only all of us could be so free.  I loved the pic and enjoyed your write.
ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT
5 posted 2004-12-02 06:23 PM


Sometimes I get caught up in the turmoil of the tanker on the horizon to just sit and enjoy the salt and spray lapping at me ....


      .... thank you for reminding me there is beauty ... still.

                                *S

choshi
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since 2004-01-01
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6 posted 2004-12-02 07:02 PM


Beautiful words.......and feelings  

Thank you ~P

*Alli4000*
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7 posted 2004-12-02 10:19 PM


Oh my - beautiful!
It's a

~Alli~

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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

iliana
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8 posted 2004-12-03 12:26 PM


Good jobber, Michele!!!  Took me there!     .....jo
Huan Yi
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Waukegan
9 posted 2004-12-03 01:12 AM



Is that a warship I see.

Dark Angel
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10 posted 2004-12-03 03:58 AM


Finding beauty in the smaller things is a rise above the rest...

Wonderful Michelle...

Maree

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
11 posted 2004-12-03 06:15 AM


very beautiful, Michele

M

passing shadows
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displaced
12 posted 2004-12-03 07:07 AM


yes, for the moment

so gorgeous!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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13 posted 2004-12-03 07:11 AM


Reminds me of the Jersey Shore, Point Pleasant, on an overcast day...almost alone on the beach, no noise, simply the sail of all of natures things...

Thank you for this tremendous smile which now warms my heart.

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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14 posted 2004-12-03 07:16 AM


Lee : thanks, actually it was coney island
but point pleasant is so close to my heart...about l5 minutes away

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
15 posted 2004-12-27 01:31 PM


I was there last July and loved it...

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
16 posted 2004-12-27 08:57 PM


susan c..
give me a ring next time you're down in the area; would love to meet for some java

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