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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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No Matter No matter how I pound this dust It never seems to form a crust It stays upon the mist of moor And never does it form a core For time dissolves it in the sea The enzyme of its mystery And I can only ply the real And sigh and witness that I feel To sigh the echoes not enough Whatever formed this slippery stuff? And dance upon the pit of dread Until my dance is done and dead I did not ask this paradox This form of deadly chicken pox Eating of my mind and bone Even if I turn to stone I can but only vie its end And cry where flows this river wend? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And cry where flows this rivers wend... You've pounded the keys sufficiently, my friend.. 26,000 times plus... Congratulations on such a milestone, Sy... I hope you find ways to pound them 26,000 times more...  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Magnifico! Congrats on 26,000! Enjoyed Seymour. Maree  into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
wonderful write, and congratulations Sey! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful morning write Sy! Congrats on this milestone post! ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~ Let peace begin with me... ~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A fitting write to mark a milestone. Congrats Sy!!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"For time dissolves it in the sea" ~ "And sigh and witness that I feel" ~ "To sigh the echoes not enough" I really liked these lines and you know it's always got that  congratulations on the 26 too  |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Good morning, Sy Amazing poetry here, loved it, and congrats. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
A perfect flow of words. Eric |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
No matter how I pound this dust It never seems to form a crust ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ For time dissolves it in the sea The enzyme of its mystery ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sy, Sy, Sy, ...those two couplets are poetic gold and speak of all untold. Tis lines like those that make me smile at your wile and beguile.  26,000!!!! Woo Hooo... thats a whole lotta winkies.  LOLHow we love your mind and your rhymes divine. *ww*   |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write! And congrats on 26,000 posts!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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