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pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2004-12-02 05:29 AM

tremble!

a beautiful
vibration
of a person, you…  reminder
of pulse
touching the end
of smiling skin.

i adore
the recognition…

disconnected
from time
placed
into the hands of the moment.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-12-02 09:05 AM

Oh...ya!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2004-12-02 09:11 AM

cool write

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2004-12-03 01:18 AM

You, sir, are worthy of study.... I enjoy a lot of different poetry styles and voices, but yours is one of the few that stops me in my tracks. Well done!

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Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2004-12-03 03:53 AM

a beautiful
vibration
of a person, you… reminder
of pulse
touching the end
of smiling skin.

O, ya... I love this.

Fantastic imagery.

Maree

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2004-12-03 06:05 AM

~smiling~

M

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-12-03 06:18 AM

yeah...I'm trembling

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

7 posted 2004-12-03 07:00 AM

thank u kind people u make me tremble

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2004-12-03 07:14 AM

ahhhh yes, and that moment can last a lifetime...a treasured write

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2004-12-03 02:50 PM

smiling skin... *S* How I love that image! *S* Excellent write! *S*

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2004-12-04 12:07 PM

Enjoyed...James

~eternal child~
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since 2004-11-23

Posts 31

11 posted 2004-12-04 12:31 PM

great images in this

enjoyed

~ec~

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

12 posted 2004-12-04 02:17 PM

Nice write!!

Enjoyed~

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

13 posted 2004-12-04 02:23 PM

o ya

hell ya

I love this one especially!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

14 posted 2004-12-04 02:31 PM

O, ya....WOW!!!!
I love this!!!
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me... ~

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