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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2004-12-01 09:50 PM



Yes I was a child
A little too wild

But now I tried
And how I cried

I will never be
entirely free

Of disires
Endless fires

I'll never excape thier eyes
-The world they want to control-
Is the same place I dispise\

I refuse to be a toy
Fondled, then tossed by a boy

All I want to do is fall away
and thenbe held hearing "It's ok"
Juju

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Ericc
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1 posted 2004-12-02 12:09 PM


Very powerful write.

Eric

Juju
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In your dreams
2 posted 2004-12-02 12:36 PM


Thank you. It is me releasing built up emotions from long ago

juju

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3 posted 2004-12-02 05:57 PM


"I will never be
entirely free

Of disires
Endless fires"

know the feeling

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4 posted 2004-12-02 06:26 PM


VERY good write!

~Alli~

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Juju
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In your dreams
5 posted 2004-12-03 12:31 PM


Thanjk you
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displaced
6 posted 2004-12-03 12:10 PM


oh Juju...
Juju
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In your dreams
7 posted 2004-12-03 03:23 PM


Thank you for the hug. I needed one.

Juju

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