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Open Poetry #34

On the hoof romantic

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

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0 posted 2004-12-01 04:19 PM

We danced

Your foot

Buried in mine

A reminder

Of a night

Now

Can we imagine that moment

And remove your heel

As I remember

Your perfume

And the use

Of my toes

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-12-02 09:14 AM

This provided a chuckle...
probably shouldn't have,
but it did...

remembering.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-12-02 09:19 AM

OH WOW!!!!
This one packs a punch...
I hope your foot isn't bruised..or your heart.

Much enjoyed this slice of life.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Let peace begin with me... ~

SEA

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with you

3 posted 2004-12-02 09:45 AM

"As I remember

Your perfume

And the use

Of my toes"

talented toes??

enjoyed this

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

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4 posted 2004-12-02 12:02 PM

Wow...excellent write!

Eric

DavePage
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5 posted 2004-12-02 03:48 PM

Thanks.

How many times do we think of life as dance that merely lacks cold feet from time to time and then we are wrong again.

Dave

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6 posted 2004-12-02 06:27 PM

Very good write Dave...love this!

~Alli~

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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

DavePage
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7 posted 2004-12-03 04:08 PM

Thanks Alli

I supose we are have expectations, dreams, memories and sometimes they are all the same.

Dave

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