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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-12-01 03:28 PM


I was working on bringing both Astral Plains and Leaf together and edited them on the fly as I posted the Leaf words.

I then got the real thing together, which I didn't expect to do in this time of hacking words on a screen and the title is Essence.

Dave

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                     Essence


Early evening light of thought to understand connections of light in the hubris of a day’s delight seeing more than we could think, understand, acknowledge, believe, and want, frightened by such force on a darkened background as a neural power sparkled on a transparent dark blue sky as we felt days in awesome power sparking fragments on auras that later cost minutes as years disappeared in memories of seconds and light flew without understanding of direction, power or reason from simple unadorned thoughts that crept to understanding of each other and left creed, religion, force and hatred behind.

In simple minds we focused each other and unfocused on more than meeting minds to flash electric thoughts that grew in gravity until we flew in thought bonding mind awestruck in feeling mindless understanding of our bodies, minds, ambitions, strength and feeling.

As a leaf we called currents searching weightless horizons diving our selves into an essence of ourselves to run, not in mystery, honesty, nor from ourselves but touch of a faint breeze caressing hope within a belief as we flew.

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