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Susan
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0 posted 2004-12-01 11:28 AM


satin and shadows

Sweet Dreams
I shall meet you by the fire side
and we shall lay together
clasped in embrace

let our shivers sooth our sighs
and our skin ends be welded one


knowing each others rhythm
and breath
lay with me my shadow
through the chill night hours

and with me my satin
give me the warm of your woman
and heat my heart
til it is pele's pool

and our eyes are odin's wax window


s.a.t. / d.s.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

© Copyright 2004 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-12-01 11:29 AM



Ah...a tango...


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2 posted 2004-12-01 11:52 AM


A beautiful coupling!!  
Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2004-12-01 12:00 PM


ms satin, dare I love your musespeak here and your embrace..will Odin freeze this moment in a shadow's time..and gift us with others in slow touch whispers, dare I pray this with pagan plea?  Yes I dare and damn the outcome...(BTW how tall is Odin?  is he real mean too..ah heck I can run fast)..thanks babe for sharing the romance here, the pleasure blend, the daydream dance

a shadowy D

and ms Sunshine and ms Martie, thank you two for your smile and waves over this sighseep.


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4 posted 2004-12-01 12:05 PM


oh...what colors you two weave out of the shadows...lovely...

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5 posted 2004-12-01 01:16 PM


Oh my...this is exquisite!
Please du-et again...wow!

~ Let peace begin with me... ~

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6 posted 2004-12-01 02:07 PM


My-my!  Simply a seamless weaving of words here.
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7 posted 2004-12-01 02:10 PM


nicely done...

  enjoyed the muses eyes....



Susan
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8 posted 2004-12-01 02:27 PM


I too thank you all and am glad you enjoyed our shadow waltz -

   Susan

btw D- Odin is just a big softy - as Viking Gods go - I'm certain he'll welcome us into Valhala with open arms - no sacrifices required  


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9 posted 2004-12-01 04:16 PM


SatinSuzz..whew...thanks I was so afraid my virginity was going to be given off to some ruthless viking goddess with flaxen hair and bountiful bosom...guess you get me in my purity then...(hehe) HEY ya'll quit laughing..I still have a few chased thoughts..(no it is not a typo)
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10 posted 2004-12-01 04:25 PM


(chuckling)...

  chased...yeah, I believe that amigo...
much more than I would had you spelled it differently....
  

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11 posted 2004-12-01 06:51 PM


very nice...James
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12 posted 2004-12-01 07:13 PM


Laughing at DS and CPAT...

You both have done well with this...keeping
the fires burning around the wagon...

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13 posted 2004-12-01 07:15 PM


oooo, very pretty!
Susan
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14 posted 2004-12-02 11:07 AM


Smiling here at the interplay - lovin' it -

Hugs all - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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15 posted 2004-12-02 06:26 PM


Very nice!

~Alli~

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Susan
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16 posted 2004-12-02 09:04 PM


thank you Alli for the smile

Susan

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