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Sunshine
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0 posted 2004-12-01 08:50 AM




     

The Littlest Angel

May I be
Your littlest angel
A spirit in your heart

You can’t see me
Only feel me
In the smile that I impart

May I be
Your kindest thought
A lone and random act

Might I see
The kind of thee
Giving with thoughtful tact

Would you mind
If I unwind
And stay here a little while

To spread the
Cheer of me through thee
In your wondrous smile

Might I lay
In your busy hands
Do the bidding you command

Help you stroke
The fires kind
In loving all of mankind

May I be
Your Christmas gift
Your heart to lift

Then might I stay
The whole year through
This littlest angel
Inside of you





© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-12-01 08:51 AM


grinnin ear to ear...
simply beautiful!

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2 posted 2004-12-01 08:55 AM


Beautiful Karilea..a wonderful way
to start the season..and my day!!!
Thank you, and hugs coming your way.

~ Let peace begin with me... ~

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3 posted 2004-12-01 08:56 AM


For so many reasons... many I couldn't verbalize if I tried... this brought tears... she'd have a soggy existence with me even if I could be deserving. *S*

Beautiful work, fine lady. *S*

kayjay
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4 posted 2004-12-01 09:01 AM


This is a warm and giving request, asking nothing and giving all.  Well written!

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

jellybeans
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5 posted 2004-12-01 02:39 PM


*smiling*...and sighing...thank you
scorpio
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right...there
6 posted 2004-12-01 02:44 PM


A beautiful expression of the generous spirit of Christmas.

believe in what your heart feels...

Susan
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7 posted 2004-12-01 03:01 PM


What a lovely little angel - company that we all need -

Nicely done -

susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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8 posted 2004-12-01 03:18 PM


She's a beautiful Angel Kari, just like you

and I absolutely loved the flow of your poem

beautiful!

Mxx

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

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9 posted 2004-12-01 04:43 PM


wow...wonderful write...

~Alli~

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OH
10 posted 2004-12-01 05:17 PM


Sunshine,
   Darling!  I'm wondering, do you mind if I post this in our lounge?  It's so sweet and well written!
        miscellanea

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11 posted 2004-12-01 07:14 PM


precious
Martie
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12 posted 2004-12-01 07:16 PM


Sissie

You already are an angel to me....!!  

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13 posted 2004-12-01 09:10 PM


Awwww Karilea, this is the most beautiful poem.
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