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milkweed
Junior Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 42
fields of gold

0 posted 2004-12-01 01:04 AM


Angst
Anger
Fist
Fire
Emotion
Emoting
Burning
Desire
To communicate with a dying world
zombie sleeping next to me.
Hold my arm up higher
so teacher really sees me.
No
One
Same
Sum
Angst
Anger
Fist
Fire
Emotion
Bloating

How many really see
Basket weave in sanity,
The fabric history wove to be
Printed out and labeled free?


© Copyright 2004 Grace - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2004-12-01 05:40 AM


enjoyed ~~
and Welcome

M

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2004-12-01 09:39 AM


how many?
there are times i would prefer to be basket weaving myself and cross over the sane/insane line already
welcome; hope you'll stay a while

*Alli4000*
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The World of Poetry
3 posted 2004-12-01 04:47 PM


Wow! Great write.

~Alli~

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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

4 posted 2004-12-01 05:12 PM


Sounds like a good rant but only you know when the vision departs from your words.

Dave

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
5 posted 2004-12-02 08:50 AM


First, let me thank you for stopping to read my prose.  It led me up to #34 to read your poem.  I don't have as much time to frequent the blue pages as often as I did, so I've apparently missed your entrance.  I send a belated Welcome to Passions!  

Intriquing write.  It causes me to wonder...
I'm curious as to the setting.  It could be several places and relate to several very different situations!  
          miscellanea

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