Love Not Appreciated - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #34

Love Not Appreciated

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

0 posted 2004-11-30 11:21 PM

Love Not Appreciated

You were the fire that warmed my icy heart,
My blanket against the harshness of reality;
But memories no longer warm my lonely bed
And time is not a welcomed companion.

Do you remember the baths I used to prepare for you?
And the many colorful candles that surrounded your glistening body?
Did you ever count the rose petals that kissed the waters surface?
Do you remember the taste of wine, when I kissed your lips?
Why do I now taste only my salty tears?

We were like the moon and the sun,
Two glowing celestial bodies,
Often merging into an eclipse,
Bonding as one heart;
Now we see each other only in passing…
Where did the love go?

I laced you with diamonds and gold
Because a queen deserves such beauty;
If I could own the skies,
The stars would be your necklace---
A woman deserves such beauty,
But shouldn’t a man deserve her appreciation?

I miss cooking you those meals,
When your smile gleamed more than a thank you;
It was your smile that tamed my soul
And made me forget to love myself;
I had fallen in love with you
But now I have risen to move on
Because I can’t make you love me anymore.

Marcel

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2004-11-30 11:51 PM

As unique as each star is the love expressed from each light, and to not appreciate that is probably the only true sin we bear.
You earned your wings.
TD

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2004-12-01 07:00 PM

A beautiful flow of words...lots of thoughts within...I often find myself thinking of the things I require in a relationship...they are; to be admired and to be desired...if these elements are missing or lacking I feel the loss...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-12-01 07:18 PM

do the best you can, someone will deserve you

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.