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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-11-30 05:32 PM


Losing You


I heard your whispers
   in my sleep,
making promises you would
   never keep.

I knew my days with
   you were few,
in my dreams I was
   losing you.


JamesLee
November29
2004

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Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-11-30 08:11 PM


Sad - so sad -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams
2 posted 2004-11-30 09:28 PM


sad.
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-11-30 09:41 PM


Oh no..I'm so sorry James.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Let peace begin with me... ~

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

4 posted 2004-11-30 09:45 PM


James

Mxx

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

marcel
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since 2003-03-02
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az, usa
5 posted 2004-11-30 10:38 PM


sad, but true words....sadness has never been read, sweeter.
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2004-12-01 06:49 PM


Thank you Susan, juju, Enchantress, Dark Angel and marcel...these words are just thoughts, you know the kind you have when something goes wrong...anyway I'm not losing her...I better not be...I told her that when she's mean to me it hurts me, and it kind of broke the ice...she's taking it to heart...James
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