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Open Poetry #34

Sister

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2004-11-30 04:59 PM

"Sister"

My sister lost in dispair
You have demons in your hair
and they are every where
tell me just how do you bare

Yes your beautiful today
If you won't scare me away
If you do it's still ok
I'M YOUR SISTER "I WILL STAY"

So tell me what can you do
when your world is just so blue
even if you hurt me too.....
Sister I will still love you

-Juli '04

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

1 posted 2004-11-30 06:27 PM

wow, i felt like my own sister was the subject matter! so i guess i can relate ...
honestly.

good write.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-11-30 08:12 PM

Ah, kindness and love - acceptance - very nice -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2004-11-30 09:24 PM

thank you

JUJU

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2004-12-01 07:05 PM

Nice writing...James

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-12-01 07:19 PM

love this

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

6 posted 2004-12-01 07:23 PM

Like this very much

Dave

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

7 posted 2004-12-01 09:31 PM

I am glad YOu liked this poem. It came from the heart(:

Juju

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