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Huan Yi
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0 posted 11-30-2004 03:24 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


The shadow
of the meadow.
The end...
without spite.

Enough,  that it is taught
from birth to think in prey.

That talents strong
in what they are
change the context of the scene.

Where a street light
is just a precipice
from which to see,
the hare still trembles within its fur.

And who are we, as drive our cars
beneath the clearer eye,

moving through,
on familiar roads,

oblivious
to the claw.
    

© Copyright 2004 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
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since 12-27-2002
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1 posted 11-30-2004 03:31 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

Bravo!!!

Well done!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


2 posted 11-30-2004 03:34 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Excellent John!!
Well done!

~ Let peace begin with me... ~

DavePage
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3 posted 11-30-2004 03:35 PM       View Profile for DavePage   Email DavePage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DavePage

The Hunter and the prey

Dave
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4 posted 11-30-2004 03:36 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Extremely well done sir.
Drauntz
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5 posted 05-15-2007 09:07 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

beautiful!
 
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