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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2004-11-30 03:02 PM


In reverence to you and the day,
a vow of gallantry in times like these
but on further consideration
one step … beyond
past twelve burning oils
a budding rose
fallen
and again the gypsy heart
veiled in white
shanghaied into pondering
a snowflake from hell
somewhere in the in between.

The lovers, the dreamers, and me
have beautiful stories to tell
of the lost and found
in these masks we wear
and God only knows
your weight in told
but looking in …
squirrels just wanna have fun
passing by
in this spiral of time.

In this quill of listless night
the smile has grown stagnant
contemplating walls,
the air of love, and summer love;
why did you have to go away
to Kroeker’s pond and Ebony Utopia
especially when me and moon
in Gloucester
expectant.

Men of the land, beware
this nymph so cool
jilted
for unknown “reasonings”- ?? – my dictionary - “reasoning”.
Still, a matter of choice
in the confines of solitude
her letting go
of her nightmare, her dream,
as seconds tick W/whisky.

We once wrote poetry
(a case of really bad poetry – but what the hey)
in sweet summers of innocence
scratched the syllables, drew curves,
at a rainbow’s end
circling passion coming in for the kill
but faithful young love
lost at the cinema show ’73
now this long, slow freeze.

I wonder what the sun saw
in my yesterdays
with your love in my heart.
How often do you wonder
if it’s all in the mind
or in a green bottle
labeled mature content-ment?

My special wish
to be cabin nestled in the bay
with my baby tonight
taking the edge off
the dangers of an unpaid bill
and throw caution to the wind,
gypsy wind,
but voiced to hollow arms
this one silent echo
time capsuled (“capsuled” ? – not in my dictionary – “encapsulated”)

I am walking
through words in weave
transcending
like a tarnished angel
computer contact
and more absurdity
of myriad acts of creation
beyond all nets
until the private viewing
of sea treasures.

Wherefrom miracles
to paint this life
like a purple popsicle?
Let me slip away
falling into ink
but nothing flows to the pen
within the drop
of cascading waters
invisible.

To be … or not
undressed
embraced in the afterglow
for you
before the job interview
just for fun
to allow in my perhaps
the soul of a fisherman?

When you take my hand in yours,
how clear the river runs
finding home
in reciprocal ocean,
romantic.

You don’t have to worry,
there is no silence
in the scale of words
thrust untitled
from word weavers
but a blessing of life
compared to the fly
on your scrambled eggs
while you were away
fencing heart thoughts
honestly.

It’s not the usual
love’s lament
but wood wings in sing
halfway hidden
in crystal tears of jade
but help me with words,
you the poet, I the pen,
night after lonely night
sweating harvests yet to come.

When I am better,
my mental hopping –
spelunk,
but a chorus of sorts
in my back pocket
for the river merchant.
I told him though,
silly boy, I only have ice for you
and wood pigeons
in my summer preserves
not elephant ears and crocodile tears
so – don’t touch me
but let me entertain you
with something about art
and a master artist
or perhaps a treasure hunt
for control
in the interlude
until soup’s on.

Don’t talk,
send love out into the world,
love of nature,
before morning coffee
and then a wave
for the poetess of the blue
before brick walls
and the limit of endurance
spaces laces in between
two suns in the sky.

Soon trees chat
but this is nothing sudden
because it started the moment
I knew I loved you
and I would say
“Goodbye, Denver”
and ignore the call of the city
in favor of a palace
with a porch
with no guilt card
but forgiveness
for a cancelled lunch date
and non-attendance at
Thanksgiving dinner
and the night dance.

In truth, indeed,
the puppeteer in the attic of reason
like a cardboard cutout
out of reach of pipedreams
on the border line of my hideaway
and I give a boast of “ transidental” - ?? “transcendental”, “transient” ??)
fond memories and flavors
to …

the leprechaun and the raven, the Viking and the gypsy,
the spooky swamp angel (sometimes I call her Honey Pie),
and superman, not forgetting John, Jane, Kara Kara,
the barber, dear Mr. President, miss misunderstood 1988,
Dehlia’s angel, Leda and the Swan, Vulpecula Vixen,
Faithless angel, fishers and shepherds, John Lee dancing on ends of apron strings
needing eternal rest, guardian spirit, my angel (I love my angel), Funny bird, auntie, maid of the mist, little man, little girls, Amy, cabana boy, my sea lover, Vanessa, hubby’s new love, the crow, the merciful, Jack and Jill Grill, my son – Shine, the Gismo, the vagrants, a stranger, Mother Goose let loose, Mother (with notes), the deer, Lady Cadaver, to Y.Y. , James Michael and his lady, AND ………. my friends, to all my friends,

if Suzie’s not around              
like a message from behind the curtain
while pretending to do the laundry
and I can’t TAKE IT BACK!

I am forever, in layman’s terms,
into girl talk – cyber romance,
and I sigh for Sy and for Bruce
bringing in the sheaves
in drooping shadows
while I, a bystander,
peel away the scales of weight
outside the glass box
off the hall of broken mirrors
behind the gate
of this sorrow.

Earth writes
written as the power of the storm
and fire that rocks the burden
of two old pros
in one fell swoop
merely a memory encounter
with the force of Alexa’s lightning
and the text will wrap automatically
like white line addiction
till there came quiet.

Oh, Daria, in key of F I heard the wind
in my azalea glade
after the gooseberry story in broken English,
fine cigars, and coffee, and cigarettes, with eyes closed,
like the birth of Venus in kaleidoscope fashion
walking through the window to sonnet whine
the merry minstrals.
Did you ever have one of those days?

1966 aerial photographs and photographs
of Florida, the plywood state
missing …
and life goes on.
There are no moments suspended in time
and I will smoke, smoke, smoke that cigarette
until the meltdown.

2.00 am

A spell of clarity, humble poet,
is there a plan for you and me
in God’s garden
only a heartbeat away?

Will you walk with me
in real love
through choral scenes
to the yellow orchid,
pluck little rosebuds
with charisma,
and, planting sage for peace
and wishbones,
hold me in quintessence
through Neptune retrograde
with the power of one?

No - he sails,
soul can’t be breathing sanity
in this land of Nod
on the fifth of July.

To have and to hold
what I seek
but fret not
my nightly journeys
perfection in symmetry
in the chain of love!


(If any readers have got this far - I salute you!)

© Copyright 2004 Helen - All Rights Reserved
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2004-11-30 03:20 PM


Holy moley...

JL

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-11-30 03:33 PM


Helen you continue to blow me away with these!!!
Well done and another BRAVA lady!
Hugs~Nancy

~ Let peace begin with me... ~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2004-11-30 03:41 PM


Oh, I indeed read "this far"! It was entertaining, amusing ~ and amazing!

I recognized so many poems and poet ~ it was a whirlwind of images woven into a fine mosaic tapestry!

Sending you a big hug,
Linda

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
4 posted 2004-11-30 04:25 PM


JL, Nancy, and Linda - Wow!  Thank you for reading!  It's getting harder now but - hey, I'm nearly there.  Please just don't ask me why I'm doing it because I really couldn't tell you - well, not "exactly".  Okay - back to the drawing board.
Ladycat
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 782
At the edge and a doorway,TX
5 posted 2004-11-30 06:51 PM


Holy wow.. Holy wow.. Now that is amazing. What a way with words.. You are a gale force my friend. Blow away.
Thank you for the great read.
*hugs*
Ladycat

"Everything changes, everything stays the same."-Bill Austin

Magnus
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Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
6 posted 2004-11-30 08:20 PM


You have taken on a task that others would
cry "Uncle" over,  very early into the
game...

I applaud you,  and it is an enjoyable
journey....thanx.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
7 posted 2004-12-01 06:41 AM


Thanks, Ladycat and Magnus.  Indeed it is a journey - thank you for your company!
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