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Another Tuesday Mourning
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Another Tuesday Mourning |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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thoughts fill the silence with humming contentment as I pretend with the best of them that life is good that you are here beside me and I can feel whenever I wish and that loving you is just a breath away my mind is envious of time and space waiting, always waiting my walk in life would love to run and be lifted feeling the strength of beat see the eyes of delight trained on me and arms, arms that never release encircling my world... M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and that loving you is just a breath away simply beautiful M! lovely |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Like it a lot Dave |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a tribute to love...wonderfully penned |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good word play, m'dear... at least we have our imaginations... and a well that never seems to dry...  |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
" Pretend with the best of them , that life is good..... hey Maureen me too !!!! Hope |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Heart felt and stirring - lonely - big hugs -  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
Honest write, and to the point. Reminds me of a time long since gone by my own hand. Your writing is truthfull, and hits home. I enjoy your posts. Thanks. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“arms that never release encircling my world...” Beautiful thoughts for: “Another Tuesday Mourning” JL |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"loving you is just a breath away" What a beautiful line here...I've been sitting here for several minutes just thinking about that line...beautiful Maureen. Heart hugs sweet lady~ ~ Let peace begin with me... ~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I am with Nancy on this one...loved that line. As if to say..if you just reach out it can be beautiful... Maureen, you outdid yourself. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
so very perfect.... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful Maureen  Mxx into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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