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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-02-05 01:51 AM



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"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache" ~neruda

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2005-02-05 03:54 AM


You lady, are doing beautiful work here.

Writing generally frustrates me as too linear and two dimensional but with this, you manage to capture movement, and I'm not one to love a flat graphic for enhancement, but this is perfect.

It left me feeling "fluttered".

I like that much.

You captured me.

EvocativeVerse2
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2 posted 2005-02-05 04:02 AM


Love it! Hell yeah! This is just damn beautiful. It's like the press of lips to the softness of flesh. Lord this is some of the most exquiste work I have seen from you in a while Snowy! Hot, hot, hot, hot hot! Somebody check the thermostat...the lady is on FIRE!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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3 posted 2005-02-05 07:28 AM


Leonid clusters fall from the heavens in reverence of your precious bijous, but are tenebrous with comparrison to your discourse...

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

Susan
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4 posted 2005-02-05 05:57 PM


Mmm - had to bump this up to the top - it needs to be seen, felt, read and savored -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

the_loner_23
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5 posted 2005-02-05 06:00 PM


I love it. Very awesome write indeed.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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6 posted 2005-02-05 07:21 PM




~Alli~

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Soulfisher
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7 posted 2005-02-05 09:30 PM


WOW DO BELIEVE I WILL BE READING YOU MORE OFTEN SNOW VERY NICE IMAGERY AND BLENDING. THE SEA REFLECTING THE SKY THE SKY REFLECTING THE COLORS OF THE SEA BOTH MERGING TOGETHER AS ONE AS THEY ARE EQUALY YOKED TOGETHER. NICE
Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
8 posted 2005-02-06 02:32 AM


thank you all very much for such wonderful thoughts !!


~~~~~~~
"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache" ~neruda

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9 posted 2005-02-06 11:30 PM


awesome!
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10 posted 2005-02-07 07:44 PM


Wow! This is very, very well done, Snow!


Corinne

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