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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-11-29 01:05 PM


Leaning Into You

The slight of a meet,
the light of a touch
enough warmth
to keep the fires burning.

It is the little things
that bring about change,
that raise the sorrows
to forget the regrets.

I am with you in spirit
and in all that remains...
a journal of you inscribed
in my mind, always
and forever.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-11-29 01:14 PM


simply lovely....
memories can indeed heal and flourish
true love is abounding

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-11-29 01:59 PM


"I am with you in spirit
and in all that remains...
a journal of you inscribed
in my mind"

Beautifully expressed Maureen.
Heart Hugs~Nancy

~ Let peace begin with me... ~

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-11-29 02:07 PM


Very true and good words

Dav

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
4 posted 2004-11-29 05:40 PM


"I am with you in spirit
and in all that remains...
a journal of you inscribed
in my mind, always
and forever."

Just too darn sweet!
Great poem!

JL



miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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OH
5 posted 2004-11-29 06:50 PM


You describe this well.  Enjoyed.  
          miscellanea

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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6 posted 2004-12-01 08:11 AM


nice touch here
in the leaning into

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2004-12-11 08:56 AM


yes

sigh

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
8 posted 2004-12-11 10:17 AM


Well I use to be
the one leaned upon...once in a while
it is nice to be the leanee/leaner?sp?

well I think you get the idea

Thanks
M


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