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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-11-29 08:26 AM


bolo sin tegument
I day dream the shimmer
of hollow hone
making the music
on leather

like lovers
sheathing
the iron and sighs
of a damp dance
under a voyeur sky

you are gift mouth
whispering lipstick
from your eyes
soul speak welcome
to the battle line

will I capture there
the treasure of tremble
will you surrender slow
and make me punish the moments
with a highlander's ferver

and when the day ends
and your spoils are my feast
will you fold my katana
under your ribs
and fall slow down

begging me to wound you more

_____________
dark

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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-11-29 08:34 AM


close enough to see the deep green shades
creadling bouquets of chrysanthemums
glistening petals
slow steaming in stainless steel vaults
where promises talk in prayers

Good Morning

Hope you had a lovely Holiday

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
2 posted 2004-11-29 09:19 AM


"begging me to wound you more"

The only time I beg..

and I am sure it would be worth it.

Mornin' D!


"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2004-11-29 10:29 AM


didgeridoo hollow haunting hymm
low moan plaintive cry
skin of water poured within
allowing female chant to sing

~*~

although a highlander chant,
m'poet...
you made the aborigines take note
as hollow meets cave...

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
4 posted 2004-11-29 10:59 AM


walk the magic circle
parry and thrust
arms to the ready
ready for the disarm
terms of surrender
negotiated -

grin - but whom is which?  Ah, but that's half the fun - finding out

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
5 posted 2004-11-30 04:45 PM


i told him
he needn't beg
i was already there

Zinsser
Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.
6 posted 2004-11-30 06:41 PM


this is great.... I like it more with each time I pass over it

~C~

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