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Light Within |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
A gentle creak as morning breeze prises the door, lock forgotten the night before. A chink of light from rising sun, breaks the darkness from within. Like words written intended or un-intended, lifts shadows, and casts a light thought forgotten, on a heart that resides therein. Words read, from a lady of the dawn whose gentle speak of words on sheet gives smiles, while riding the miles on the lines in-between. And a touch is all love requires. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a very beautiful poem, Frank~~ always nice to read your words  M |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Certainly lovely to read "you". I often write to and of "you" - it's an amazing word if one thinks about it. Ah, yes, the touch ... even more amazing. Dawn is such a special time - it heralds beginnings. And I'm on my soapbox again - sorry. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
how utterly true.... Marvelous read |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Frank~ This is just totally beautiful~ Tenderly penned~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Delight to read....amazing write! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes beautiful |
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