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A Musing... |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
O’ would it be that I could flee into the bosom of all knowing, from a caustic pained agnostic to warm soothe of candle’s glowing. A photograph, a young child’s laugh, it all seems simple; simply when, as memories fade of childhoods played, and lost within is now and then. No tick of clock, or second’s tock, no timeline to be reading, hours and days in endless plays, before the tides’ receding. Months and years hide endless fears, in seek I lose all bearing, what price to pay? once cannot say, enshrouds my soul ensnaring. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Understanding this, dear Tim. It touches my heart. Thankyou!  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I saw this earlier, knew I would be in to read it, not knowing just how close to home the bells sound... Thank you, Sir. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Tim...much enjoyed. Hugs~Nancy ~ Let peace begin with me... ~ |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
I love this..... ~connie~` |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
very craftily woven piece! enjoyed the thought provoking and questioning verses.....tight! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this read like a river...flowing evermore |
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