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Footsteps On The Window
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Footsteps On The Window |
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Darker Season Junior Member
since 2004-04-01
Posts 48Wisconsin |
Footsteps on the window Endless self-denial Lord, do I feel guilty Looking at her smile With elegance and beauty Shining from her face Dancing with her heartbeat All my worries are erased Then lost in admiration New miracles appear And paradise gets doubled When she looks into a mirror Oh, Footsteps on the window Guide me for awhile You keep me moving forward When I'm looking at her smile I'm looking at, loving it, living in...her...smile [This message has been edited by Darker Season (11-29-2004 11:24 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm liking this...  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I'm liking this TOO! TD |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Nice |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
would love to hear this put to music... enjoyed |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
This was quite a tribute (I remember as a kid making 'baby footprints" on the steamed car windows with the hammer side of a fist and dotting fingers for toes....) a tribute to a beloved and a poem that drew me in. Enjoyed |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Andrew~ I'm with Lee on this ... would love to see this expanded into a song~  Enjoyed~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
this would be great to Greenday's music for vindicated... I don't know why but i started singing it to that music : ) |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Love this...and I can hear what Zinsser is talking about. Amazing write... ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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