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Ramdom words to you, if I ever see you again
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Ramdom words to you, if I ever see you again |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Moments of time fall like raindrops And wash away in to the streets Memories fade like old photos And suppressed by priority How divine, forgetting you was I almost remembered your voice Like wind, your voice could change my day How I adored that voice of yours Funny how you hurting me so Made me a better person now It would be truly humorous If you found these words romantic Because my little heart breaking Honestly isn’t a good thing. I hope soon all this bitterness Will pass like the migrating birds - Maybe I will enjoy winter Watching all the pretty snowflakes- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah...I agree words well said |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Random words, chosen well. Enjoyed. miscellanea |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
(; Thanx, I could never Find the words till now, unfortunitly some are deeper then I want them to go. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
James. I havn't seen much of you, but then again I my self am not around much lol. |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Go get em'. You deserve better. Your message is abundantly clear. Hopefully, your intended audience received the message in the manner in which you created it. Enjoy the snow flakes. Enjoy the sunrise and the sunset. Enjoy the magic of solstice and of snow angels untethered by a facade of love. Real love doesn't abandon. It also isn't rushed. You'll find what your looking for...better, it will find you - while you're counting snow flakes! Your poem really touched me. I genuinely hope you see the good things in life...like your talent for poetry. This was a beautiful, intimate write. Thank you for sharing it. Your poetic friend, Kevin |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thankyou Juju |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Love this Juju!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you Alli |
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