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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-11-28 01:48 PM


It was a bad hair day
On moments of words
To make
Teeth growing longer
Snap at food
Trapped by a pan
As nails grew
Shoes split
I ate the pan
Not enough flavour
In pans these days
Feeling a little stronger
Arms a little longer
Bath was an option
Swinging in
Was
Not an idea

It makes the keyboard wet

And so with a long mind to match a face
Speaking what I feel
In the wrong place

Still today seems a good day
And maybe Bombay
A joust
At another way

Dave


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RSWells
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1 posted 2004-11-29 11:08 AM


One so striven,
by guilt driven
is surely forgiven


Earth Angel
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2 posted 2004-11-29 11:19 AM


My goodness, Dave! You certainly do not paint a very pretty picture of yourself! Your photo doesn't look anything like that! I think you are much better looking!

Hope you are having a much better day!

Warm hugs,
Linda


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3 posted 2004-11-29 12:24 PM


And I do hope today is better for you...
and the sun catches you smiling m'friend!
Happy hugs~Nancy

~ let peace begin with me... ~

LeeJ
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4 posted 2004-11-29 12:47 PM


huggles sweetie, we all have those moments


thank you for writing and sharing

jellybeans
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5 posted 2004-11-29 12:56 PM


just thank God for aplogies, and for people that accept them.....don't know where we would be without them....great write
DavePage
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6 posted 2004-11-29 01:58 PM


Thanks all

I promise to do my best not to let a day get through to me again.

Dave

passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-11-29 03:11 PM


Dave, you're okay.
You are loved.

DavePage
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8 posted 2004-11-29 04:18 PM


Thanks but losing it is not what I should have done.

regards

Dave

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9 posted 2004-11-29 04:35 PM


I didn't see where you lost anything? No apology needed.
Susan
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10 posted 2004-11-29 04:52 PM


Guess I missed it - but whatever it was - we all lose it - and this is well written -

hugs - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

JL
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11 posted 2004-11-29 05:44 PM


Hey...
Just be you, DavePage.
"A joust
At another way"

Aren't we all that way
sometimes?

JL


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12 posted 2004-11-29 09:21 PM


sure hope things get better


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13 posted 2004-12-03 01:34 AM


I came because the title was so very perfect for me....and stayed because it was a good read from beginning to end!

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DavePage
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14 posted 2004-12-03 04:00 PM


time prophet

I lost it in some replies, the way I replied, things I wrote that were not applicable to what had actually been said.  

You know in yourself when you are doing something you feel you shouldn't and I was, I felt.

Susan

Thanks

JL
Just be you, DavePage.
"A joust
At another way"

Aren't we all that way
sometimes?

JL

Yes.

MGROVES
sure hope things get better

So do I

Ratleader


I came because the title was so very perfect for me....and stayed because it was a good read from beginning to end!
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______________Ratleader______________

Thanks all

Dave



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15 posted 2004-12-03 06:03 PM


*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

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