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Leaking Colors of a Rainbow
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Leaking Colors of a Rainbow |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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Disappointment gets easier with every thrust I no longer mourn what I thought was us Today spills into tomorrow and seeps color into yesterday reminding it's best not to betray what hurts and what was lost how blood can pay the cost I shrug and wipe up saline tears shuffling aimlessly biting off the years "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Susan, this is a wonderful write. Great inspiration seems to flow along with tears ... Love, Margherita  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the rainbow dilutes into a puddle of mud, but recycles itself again into the evening sunset words well done susan |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"Disappointment gets easier with every thrust I no longer mourn what I thought was us" I'm still getting there but it's nice to know that others have succeeded. Lovely write! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Susan I'd love to see the longer version of this It seems short-changed somehow in the words It is excellent but incomplete Dave |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i know just how you feel i wish i didn't i have no answers for you for i have none for myself just know i am here one phone call or email away fla is such a small state have a cell phone and i'm not afraid to use it !!! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Full is bloom... I know how this progresses...and you will be amazed. Love your writes poet. TD |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
lol... You asked for it Dave... The reason it is short changed (yes, you are right) is because I was doing my meter count on my right hand with a kitten in my lap... ouch...I gave up adding to the poem least I lose a finger... Thank you all for the responses... "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Susan....emotions run deep here. Hugs~ ~ let peace begin with me... ~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I understand this completely. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you one and all! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Sad yet beautiful...great write. ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Ooohh. This is so sad. But I did enjoy. JL |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
bittersweet, executed very well made me feel so bad....hugs to you but I've gotta say, you take the reader to such awakening places....thank you |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
you KNOW I needed to read this one today... beautiful inspiration read here gal...thank you. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
yup, that is exactly how it feels  M |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Somedays, time is harder to swallow than anything else. thank you for all the wonderful replies and the unending support...you know who you are. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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