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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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I See I hoe a secret garden I Where grow my naive flowers sigh They bloom for me each night I sleep I water them from day times weep They are a rare and tender breed And sow from gender seeds of need From which I make illusion grow And tend them with my egos flow I often make a sighs bouquet And bring them to the light of day They glitter in my mind of think Offered with a smile and wink But many are absorbed in go Dying white like coals of sow Chase about from door to door Seeking out the evermore We are not fit eternity The soup still cooks humanity |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I often make a sighs bouquet And bring them to the light of day You do that Sy, every time we read your words and look forward to them each morning~~  M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I often make a sighs bouquet And bring them to the light of day They glitter in my mind of think Offered with a smile and wink" Sy, you bring to us a bouquet each and every day. This is so lovely to wake up to! ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~ let peace begin with me... ~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
They bloom for me each night I sleep I water them from day times weep Oh, my friend... the bouquets you bring to light of day are always such lovely ones... sometimes we forget that such gifts aren't free. *S* Beautiful work! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Well done Sy! The message is clear.  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I often make a sighs bouquet And bring them to the light of day ~*~ Yes, dear, you do... I needed this bit of see said today... |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Good to stir the soup now and then. Enjoyed |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
They bloom for me each night I sleep I water them from day times weep You see and share your visions so beautifully. And their is always wisdom weaved within. Thank you for your bouquets! Love and joy. Margherita |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
No flower cart could ever match the fragrance of your words. Excellent as usual and again packed with eyes that see with the heart and soul. Enjoyed sir. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
They are a rare and tender breed You are, indeed! Enjoyed being here again. It's great to read and hear your writing! miscellanea |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You encourage such better thoughts for us Sy...I love reading your works. TD |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The daily essence of your poetic bouquets, makes each of my days that much sweeter. Rosebud kisses, EA  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy I have a similar garden.  |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
NIce |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I often make a sighs bouquet And bring them to the light of day They glitter in my mind of think Offered with a smile and wink ========================== I do so love the glitter of your mind.   Offering a smile and a *WINKIE* right back atchya .. and a smoochie too..LOL   |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Sy, I can't get enough of you this morning forgive me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To each and every one of you, my heart felt thanks for your comments. I usually like to answer each and every one of you, but time does mot permit. |
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