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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2004-11-28 05:32 AM



Friendship's  Come

Words
have their place
some in our hearts
and some
in an emptiness
of space.

You
are my cause
of remembrance,
a time, I forgot
once...

But the enjoyment took over
and the only movement felt
was that inside a heart
needing.

Join in, feel the spirit
one that is eternal
and allows
the child in us to
grow.

When friendships come
some will last
forever...


for you
M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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1 posted 2004-11-28 05:35 AM


yes, this is beautifully you!
nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2004-11-28 05:37 AM


thank you Dixie, just wishing a new member
a warm welcome~~~

hope you are having a nice weekend

M

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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3 posted 2004-11-28 06:37 AM


That is a very warm welcome Maureen and I enjoyed the sentiment very much.


Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 2004-11-28 08:02 AM


Very sweet and hopeful.  

Well done.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2004-11-28 01:23 PM


MzWynterSpirit~

'Friendships Come' ... and they often come in the flavor of YOU~
I know that for a fact~

Hoping that EternalChild will greatly enjoy her stay within the circle of friendships here~

How very, very thoughtful of you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Dark Angel
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6 posted 2004-11-28 03:05 PM


Marge is right... They do come in the flavour of you. How very fortunate one is when that happens.

so? how's your cat? still trying to keep you awake?

This really is a beautiful poem, I'm sure Eternal child will love it.

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

DavePage
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7 posted 2004-11-28 03:42 PM


Excellent

Dave

ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2004-11-28 03:52 PM


A wonderful welcome indeed M...
TD

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9 posted 2004-11-28 10:26 PM


This a just beautiful.
~eternal child~
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10 posted 2004-11-28 11:43 PM


Maureen, you are a beautiful soul, do you know that? i don't know what to say, thank you.
and "friendship's come" yes they do indeed, in so many ways.

thank you for making me feel welcome and for this beautiful poem

~ec~



nakdthoughts
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11 posted 2004-11-29 09:24 AM


thank you  everyone, espeially "ec"

It gave me the chance to not dwell on myself
for a bit...and caught me in your moments


M

LeeJ
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12 posted 2004-11-29 10:09 AM


Join in, feel the spirit
one that is eternal
and allows
the child in us to
grow.

When friendships come
some will last
forever...

yes....this was immeasurably potent

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