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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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If artificial life was real and trapped life a steal might one become an authentic man endure the trials of real life span? but that's absurd, artificial is false far removed from what is genuine... If one could really wake from this sleep allow one live company of one to keep a mother might be the pick of a crop, her love would make any child stop The child ripped from parental bosom vied for solace from artificial sorts invaders of his lost arc, robbed him of her knowledge his experiences, once unique now cloned among their faceless kind upon a gentle touch of his forehead. A fair child remains behind after mankind falls away to have a wish come true from a fairy colored blue to see his mother alive once again she'd wake from a deep imposed sleep but eternal life wouldn't be hers to keep She'd be revived for one day only to keep the child happy he knew so little of her as an example of an artificial world far from being tucked in bed hair straight with sorrow, once curled he'd draw pictures for her pleasure she'd celebrate his birthday too their day together would then draw to an end and he would close his eyes with hers experience her sleep, enter her dreams he wanted so much to be real, pass away just as she had. He would never be a real boy he had been under artificial employ if one could really awake from this sleep allow one live company of one to keep |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A futuristic riddle of ethics. "test tube babies," "cloning," incubators, surrogates, all very chilling. Love is warm. (hey, that's where this took me Martin) and I enjoy being made to think. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
incubators and surrogates in this futuristic poem a spin off from a film called Artificial Intelligence... |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Would have to agree with RSWells on this one. :-) Within this heart you'll find love |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write Martin! The poem made me think, which I like.  ~Alli~ |
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