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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
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With my darkling

0 posted 2004-11-27 11:40 PM


At once, a sudden change of stance
and I applaud, you won this dance
with sound advice, your lawyer plants
One seed of sin, a harvest plants

A day I wish had never came
but will you find the liars game?
I speak in jest, but it's the same
it burns no less, to cool the flame

one day broke, is one day lost
and broken I forget the cost
so sad the day, we finally dream
was one day late, one day, I dreamed

and though my lovers eyes are lost
with love so deep, it's bias cost
A moment with the albatross
one day at sea, 1000 lost

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2004-11-28 05:22 AM


dang

wow

*Alli4000*
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The World of Poetry
2 posted 2004-11-28 02:39 PM


Amazing write Jason....like Dixie said, wow.

~Alli~

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-11-28 04:26 PM


Good words

Dave

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