ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
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2004-11-27
08:50 PM
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Made steam in fragrances of butterflies Creeping gloss on mirrored vanity replies Imbued in natural light, a jungle flight
Be bold, curiosity draped soft as silken wing Imagination takes this whisper into lung to sing Discovering my own song yet unsung, undone
Submerging inch by satin inch Into the culture of our mingled mind Massaging wanton thoughts of spirits blind
The strangeness passes over in a breeze There leaves a warm sensation in its please To drum within the coral of each other, happily to smother
Wild the call that settles there to leave my touch Communications traveled in the brush of hush And drum, the fragile pulse that calls you come
Cocooned into the afternoon of where we were And carried into night that same soft flight That draws me into warm and bathes my soul delight
Copyright Kkh 11/27/04
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© Copyright
2004
Kathleen Harris
- All Rights Reserved
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Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
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2004-11-27
08:52 PM
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Mmmm - Kathleen - simply lovely -
SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.
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Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
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2004-11-27
09:09 PM
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Lovely lovely Kathleen... Your warmth and eloquence grace these pages. Hugs~~ Trace my body with your words, in doing so, you touch my heart ~
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garysgirl
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
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2004-11-27
10:09 PM
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Very beautiful writing, Kathleen. Hugs.
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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
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2004-11-28
08:33 AM
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Beautiful!!!
"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" ~Sarah McLachlan~
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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
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2004-11-28
09:17 AM
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Wild the call that settles there to leave my touch Communications traveled in the brush of hush And drum, the fragile pulse that calls you come
touching lines~~
M
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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
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2004-11-28
12:24 PM
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Be bold, curiosity draped soft as silken wing Imagination takes this whisper into lung to sing Discovering my own song yet unsung, undone
Greatly inspiring, dear TD!
Very beautiful poetry! Love, Margherita
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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
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2004-11-28
01:08 PM
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lovely images, warm thoughts, fun infiltration of rhymeWhether on the shoal or on the shore, I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
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2004-11-28
01:19 PM
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TD
Amazing, the way you write...this is just beautiful!
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*Alli4000*
Member Elite
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188
The World of Poetry
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2004-11-28
03:28 PM
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Beautiful, I especially love the title.
~Alli~*:.AIM = Alli4000.:* Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...
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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917
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posted
2004-11-28
03:45 PM
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Spot on
Dave
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ctowen
Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
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posted
2004-11-28
03:54 PM
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TOUCHED!!!!
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Marge Tindal
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
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posted
2004-11-28
04:48 PM
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Kathleen~ The delicacy of your piece is music to my eyes~ Lovely ... lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram <))><
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Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
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2004-11-28
05:36 PM
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I have from the very first time reading you always enjoyed the way you spill such vivid images over emotions and thoughts in your works. This one is no exception. A beautiful piece of poetry laced with so much to see and feel. I truely enjoyed.
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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
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2004-11-28
08:03 PM
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your words fill the senses with summers touch on this late fall day
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miscellanea
Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
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2004-11-28
08:05 PM
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Submerging inch by satin inch Into the culture of our mingled mind Massaging wanton thoughts of spirits blind
TD, Love the imagery! Good to be here to read your poetry. It seems like I'm so busy anymore that I have hardly time to turn around! A pleasure to read. miscellanea
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