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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Can't think of a poetic line put good mainstay into rhyme write about a seasonal change a favorite temperature range how leafy courses change resources bark supporters then lay bare once shielded by lush green winter scene steps into view one thought he had a handle on time before signs of life buried their goods think of a poetic line from fall to winter on a dime mercury dips to a lower scale end feet will trudge through snow again can't think of a poetic verse would be the writer's curse there's always the time of day a character of sun's golden rays day that once extended beyond reach then collapses as broken speech an intensity of light wanes the earth tilts in discontent robes once ripped open then layer upon layer as winter sundries do shorter days chill the skin nightly shadows cover kin [This message has been edited by ecrivan (11-27-2004 11:02 PM).] |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Hey Martin, This is truly beautiful. I love it. Had 8 1/2 inches of snow for Thanksgiving here but the rain is taking care of it. Thank-you for a smile. :-) Within this heart you'll find love |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hope you had a good feast and many more to come...are your workmates getting work elsewhere now? |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Talk has it things are picking up more each week.Possible everyone may be back by Christmas. Keep fingers crossed. :-) Ps. Its cold here this afternoon. Within this heart you'll find love |
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