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sylvia inhaled
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sylvia inhaled |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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I cleaned the fridge today (it had been ages!!) and the family cheered !! the cows came home and called the eggmen three, some chicks had hatched in their duration, i hiked up my skirt today, and exchanged torrid glances with trucker joe, riding bareback, as he stuffed me whole, between his matching pockets, i lost at love today, and let it print incisions, like rings around the sacrificial tree, as dreams shred clean along its feet, cemented, i wrote a poem today, as leaves fell down abundantly, filling in my neverending pieces, sylvia inhaled; on a chilly dawn of '63, the ache of her inflections, and sighed its demons upon release, i pray she heard her heart sing free, as it played its lullaby beneath her. **for syliva* **for dreambuilder for reminding** [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (11-28-2004 07:38 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
*sighing* for you, and for Sylvia |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You weave such interesting and vivid pieces together, and end up making perfect candy. TD |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey inked, I absolutely love this and what you're producing lately, you've really got me in a spin  with your lush imagery and unique phrasing. though I felt the repetition of "i" in each stanza a little jumpy but in all I loved it and I want more.  I'm keeping it Mxx into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Michele...you have a very unique style and I love it!  Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Excellent...Sylvia would have loved this, as well as Anne would have... And I say only with my arms stretched out into that stone place, "what is your death but an old belonging, a mole that fell out of one of your poems? Exert-"Sylvias Death", by Anne Sexton Enjoyed... form and content.. __________ice/ford ><> |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Well written - now, will you clean my frige? I'm afraid it will reach and and pull me in should I try -  Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang girl! you rock! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very good work here, Michele. Your writing has been taking on new levels, and it's wonderful to watch you grow! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 yep. This rocks. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely writing Michele... enjoyed it immensely hugs M |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Amazing write!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
had to read this again... a gentle  Maree into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Michele, as soon as I saw the title, I knew he had something to do with this, which is a good thing. Of course she heard, she is alive within your words. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts |
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