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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-11-26 08:22 AM

oceans to mirrors
yesterdays to tomorrows
are you you again?
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I sipped the dream sin
til drunken fell heaven side
my back to memory

and dreamed again then
until you woke me slowly
and turned my dream down

face side to sin skin
your smile shadows reflect
molding my emboss

male need is kneaded
by hands dampening in thought
that keep my sigh stirred

so sleepless to lie
that I lied another truth
of forget in time

I sip the same dream
and drunken fall back again
under memory
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when water dances
ample hind loves jetting songs
who sooths the burro?
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Dark

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-11-26 08:34 AM

kewl!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-11-26 08:42 AM

Haiku, Senryu,
Thank you...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-11-26 08:54 AM

Much enjoyed these D.
Morning sighs and hugs~

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2004-11-26 09:35 AM

Very cool stuff.

you rock.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-11-26 12:02 PM

slowly walking forth
hand in hand discovery
find the balanced path

heart warms in shadow
beneath man hand melodies
sonata slow vibes

mirrors to ocean
reflection of spoons sipping
the salted sweet stream

"you" cannont be "you"
until the wh"y" is forged strong
grounding "o" and "u"

Susan

enjoyed your stuff D- you seep talent - and emotional wine

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2004-11-26 12:32 PM

ms ps..thanks to you for your kewl, you are too kewl ms

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ms sun, haikuhugs and thank you too

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ms E you smile me lady friend, thanks to you

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ms Susan C..thank you lady friend, a rock I shall be then (and you are soft smiles)

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suzu, your offering sooths the storm, lend me your ocean now, I will walk slow beside it.

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thanks to you all..

it is a pleasure when I see your eye touches

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

7 posted 2004-11-26 12:53 PM

My very favorites follow:

and dreamed again then
                          until you woke me slowly
                          and turned my dream down



                          male need is kneaded
                          by hands dampening in thought
                          that keep my sigh stirred

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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