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pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2004-11-26 05:55 AM

blossom paint
crimson to red
misses miles away
to portray
minor fade

stay

words on finger tips
blushed by shame
to exist

the outside
a cage
wounded
a place
never a trade
but
a fate

crimson
to
red

the most common
rash of truth

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-11-26 06:38 AM

each word precisely placed

a fine write indeed

nice to see you once again

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2004-11-26 09:58 AM

Pandonov....Breakfast Of Champions!

Glad I stumbled in here this morning....this poem is exactly what I needed -- that Scotland's finest, that is...and this much easier to imbibe....

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

3 posted 2004-11-26 12:08 PM

thank you guys

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-11-27 12:20 PM

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2004-11-27 01:28 AM

i like this petre....

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2004-11-27 01:30 AM

I'm in a purple fog...the blend of red and blue

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

7 posted 2004-11-27 06:10 AM

The poem is like a fine wine...
Containing different flavored berries,
With a great finish..

Applause!
___________ice
><>

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 2004-11-27 07:56 PM

Nice work Pandanov, as always

Maree.

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

9 posted 2004-11-27 08:53 PM

agree - nicely done-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2004-11-27 09:25 PM

Very nicely penned Petre.
Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

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