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~DreamChild~
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0 posted 2004-11-26 12:20 PM


Lets gather round the table all!
Do sit, and please your pallette.
The feast begins at stroke o' noon,
and so begins the ballad...

tis here the glutton stuffs his face  
and gossips spread their lies
round rotted hearth of families home
a buffet set for flies

Should, if any, give such thanks,
tip goblets high with toasts.
Remember now the Holy One,
Mighty Master, Humble Host.





~sweet dreams~
          

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-11-26 05:45 AM


good write!


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2 posted 2004-11-26 03:31 PM


hope you had a nice thanksgiving.

~Alli~

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iliana
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3 posted 2004-11-26 07:48 PM


I'm impressed!
Susan
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4 posted 2004-11-26 10:16 PM


Sad - good ending message - makes me thankful for the good hearts within my family and the true love we share in beign together -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

~DreamChild~
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5 posted 2004-11-27 12:02 PM


thanks giving should honor
the giver of life most
not food or family, or friends
all hussle and bussle,
but no solemn gratitude,
it seems with my family
i have much to give thanks for...
as do we all.

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